Monday, 22 August 2011

Lok'pal'


An attempt is made to
revive our system.
An attempt of hope for this
new generation.

A new system to fix
the diseased one.
Yet another system to
govern the other one.

Why do we need a committee
to handle the other?
Our root is the reason and
it will last as ever.

I see people marching and
they say its for a cause.
Our system is though as
stubborn as it ever was.

Do we really know what we want?
Or are we just seeking a belief.
Are we believing a random thought?
Just to seek some relief.

I don't understand a little.
And misunderstand a lot.
I don't know whether one bill's
the way for things to sought.

What i do know is one thing that
our system remains the same.
If our efforts aren't for the right cause
they'll just end in vain.

What we do want is one body,
a system, true for all.
What we do want is a system where
machines don't answer our call.

What we don't is a new one
just for the sake of handling the other.
Or else we'll push our growth
just a little more further.

We have to clean what we got.
Before making way for the new.
We have to act on this thought.
To change our systems view.

This is my attempt,my take,
on an attempt.
This is a humble request and
 not a pretent.


7 comments:

  1. "What we do want is one body,
    a system, true for all.
    What we do want is a system where
    machines don't answer our call."

    Loved the way you put it...

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  2. thanks bro.thanks a lot.....

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  3. hey,nice work. gr8 start for ur blog. Keep up the good work. Looking forward for more of ur posts. You'v got one reader for sure.!! :)

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